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Showing posts with label Writing. Show all posts

Monday, 15 October 2018

Reflections on term 3 goals


Achieved - I achieved my reading goal by reading more and trying to understand it to put it into sentences.
Achieved -  I have achieved my writing goal by getting more information or facts about a story to put into paragraphs.
Not Achieved - I have not achieved my maths goal because I have not been practising my 12 times tables at home and at school.

Wednesday, 23 May 2018

The Last Game





"I didn't know that this would happen" I said.

9 hours previously

I invited Morgan to come play video games with me on Saturday. We had picked out the newest arrivals of games at JB - HIFI. 1 game we chose was called the The Last Knight, another we also chose was called Battlefield 4, there were so much! We were so excited to play the games. While I waited for Morgan to come I was assembling all the snacks and refreshments we would eat and drink while we were playing. 10 minutes later Morgan arrived at our house with the most deafening knock on the door and shouting "Come On Open The Door!". So I went and opened it. Morgan then said "Are you excited to play Battlefield 4 and the rest of the games?, I replied by saying "Of Course I Am. 

A few minutes later we started playing the games that we bought and man the were AWESOME!!! Then the last game we played was called WATCH OUT! Morgan and I were surprised by the title of the game but we thought it was going to be exciting! As we were putting the disc of the game into the game console we realised something odd. The game had scratches all over the game disc, and it also said WARNING DO NOT PLAY, I was kinda afraid when I read that. As we played the game we fell asleep. When we woke up we realised that we didn't fall asleep, we got transferred from the human world into the game world. Morgan then tried shouting and screaming to get our parents attention but it didn't work.


Later we heard voices saying "Finish the tasks". Morgan and I did not understand what Finish the tasks meant but we tried to figure it out. Soon we found this obstacle course that we thought was one of the tasks that we had to complete. The obstacle course looked really challenging, it had chainsaws to run through, tables you have to jump across, it was really hard to get through. Once Morgan and I finished the obstacles we heard another voice saying " You have 2 more tasks to do". Morgan and I were so happy because we were thinking that if we finish all our tasks we might get to go back home!


As we were looking for the next task, Morgan found a shell. The shell had the most appealing patterns we have ever seen. I then blew the shell and Morgan and I fell and slept. When Morgan and I awoke we realised we were back home in the human world. We were so happy to back home. As we saw our parents we RUSHED into their arms and hugged them. Next time we see that game we won't play it!

Monday, 7 May 2018

My Recount

(Introduction)
On the 1st Wednesday of the school holidays my mum, my brother and I went to Bungee Jump. We went to Bungee Jump because we finished cleaning our house.

(Paid for Bungee Jump)
When my mum told my brother and I that we were going we were so EXCITED!!! My mum paid for my brother and I to jump because she had the money. While my brother and I were waiting in line with our mum, I felt like I had butterflies in my stomach. The line that we were waiting in was small in the front but as it went longer I felt nervous. I worried that if I jump the ropes might break but my mum said it won't. 

(Bungee Jumping)
After waiting in line for 10 minutes it was my brother and I's turn to Bungee Jump. I could tell that my brother was feeling brave because when the worker said "You 2 here please" my brother ran but I just walked.  The first thing that the worker said to me before he strapped me up was "How old are you?", I said 9 years old. When he finished strapping me with the ropes he counted down from 5 then I jumped. 

(Bought Food)
After we bungee jumped we bought Subway. I had a bread called Grain bread, but when I go to Subway I usually get White bread but Grain bread was okay. My brother and I got Oreo milkshakes that were really yummy. 

(Conclusion)
I felt so excited and so happy when going to bungee jump. I wish that I went back to bungee jump so that I can experience that feeling again which was flying. I also wish that it lasted longer. I had a great time bungee jumping!

Tuesday, 1 May 2018

Reflection on Term 1 Goals

Reading:My goal for reading is to improve my expression because I read with a low tone. My other goal for reading is knowing what the word in the story means.
Not Achieved: I did not achieved it because I forgot I had this goal.

Writing:My goal for writing is to have more detail.My other goal for writing is to have more paragraphs.
Achieved: I achieved it because I was focusing on my writing.

Maths:My goal for maths is to learn how to tell time.
Achieved: I achieved this goal when my dad was getting his massage while I was sitting in their looking at the clock.
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Tuesday, 13 March 2018

The SURPRISE




                                               I walk through the door 
                                   with a big ROAR
                               Mums eating breakfast
                                     but I just ignore
                                                 I looked in the pantry
                                 and guess what I saw
                                A really cute puppy 
                                  that I just adored 
                                  I closed my eyes
                               and my face was wet
                             I woke up from a dream
                          and it was not what it seemed
                                   
                                                       

Wednesday, 12 October 2016

The Dancing Poem

I did a limerick poem. Its about a girl who likes to dance and she has to teach her friend who's a boy that has to dance hip hop and jazz. Dancing makes me happy because I move and dance around. It's also very very fun.